Thursday, August 27, 2020
My Rusty Squeeze Box Poem Comments
Rating: ★5.0
My poem has seized solid,
It doesn't flow or beat.
Its meter's off by miles,
Perhaps one to delete.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
27 August 2020
What a wonderful poem. A unique and one of a kind write. A great Poet can always think of a way to make his poems enchanting to read. Beautifully crafted, we'll executed with nice rhyme. Top marks!
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8/22/2025 11:28:59 PM # 1.0.0
Great use of metaphor deployed here Shaun...nice rhyme scheme..Hopefully, this isn't going to apply to my new car...God forbid! Anyhow, it's a keep oiling one's rusty old poems (I too tend to do that a lot) inspired ten from me.