CUT CUT CUT
is ALL i ever did
But one day it came to me
'Man this is STOOPID'
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I must have a dirty mind. I thought this was gong to be about something completely different. But since I'm here, have you ever tried those inch wide package bands? POW like a blackjack, you remember that POP
Now this is a poem. It also has thyme and some meter. That gives it a boost. Also, I credit the writer for her imagination. The fact that this is not true is far better poetically than if it were. It is a rather simple poem so it doesn't get a 9, but it is a solid 8 and recommended. GW62