My Rose Comments

defenitly unique. i love how well you compared each aspect, however it gave me a slight feeling that it was a little out of focus. great poem though.: ]

Beautiful imagery! ! ! ! completely a unique poem! ! ! ! i would like for you to read my poem... what do you see in a rose

excellent! although i think it should say: Its smell so sweet like my breath. instead of: Its smell so sweet like the I breath. good write tho ;) keep it up.