Thursday, May 24, 2007

*my Room, The Lock* Comments

Rating: 3.0

I’m in a dark quite room, with a
Lock to keep me in
I pray for death to come soon, an
End to the pain held within.
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Daniel Richards
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Patti Masterman 10 February 2009

I really like this poem and the ending is so fitting. It has a quality sort of like a song, with a refrain.

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