Saturday, July 14, 2012
My Room Comments
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I feel the cancer of this room
Pull me into seven circles
And entwine some ferial mood
Until my souls mercurial
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Shelley Jones
29 July 2012
I thought it was good, really good. Meant to comment the night you wrote it but there were other things to which I had to attend. Hope you're feeling better.
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8/1/2025 9:00:49 AM # 1.0.0
Not sure how to interpret this one, but it sounds kind of morbid, with a very sad overtone. I wish your room were not as melancholic. You deserve much better.