My River Comments

Reading your poem was as good as being there.What a dream-almost a mirage in the desert.10.

Really a great theme And wonderfull write.......... Great job........10++

River of love and life. Loved the character of the river and its expression! So well penned; D

Amazing poem…like romance with river entwined with river 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

Amazing poem…like romance with river entwined with river 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

Lovely beautiful poem long like a river enjoyed reading it...good imagination...10+++

The poem was long like a river it was a good poetic and romantic write

this poem stirs and ripples..takes one to the river bed..lovely imagery

I had a crek and still to this day, like you when I feel homesick my dreams take me there. great reminisence.-10

this is a lovely beautiful write indeed sir! ! ! this is such a great one to the heal the wounded, sore mind! ! liked it very much...10 with lots of love shan

A touching nostalgic piece of work. I'm from Kerela a lovely place in India and those lines you've jotted down makes me wanna go back. I miss ma home. Love it.

Beautifuly conversation as like a anthropomorphism.

This one creates a vivid image in the mind of reader...You should consider serious business in writing if you haven't done yet...My best wishes

Nice Poem! Lovely imagery!

Sterling imagework....mellifluous movement....Solid Craftsmanship, Noor! FjR

You remind me of the river I used to hang out with many friends back home.Its the ' Singapore River'. Now, it crosses through the heart of the city's Central Business District and the great skyliners.No doubt, your description of 'my river' was superb and splendid.Good work Noorudeen!

Gracefully written....Brishti Mazumdar

nicely penned..grace

a great contemplation write reminiscing the river in usual way and in comparison to reality in a borrowed country of all desert environment....well narrated poem..

This is an extra ordinary piece of poetry. I read it carefully and studied it for some generous time and I will come back to read it again. My late father told me to watch for life's interesting contrasts and war of elements, he called. Discovering beauty in the least expected corners and finding the most peculiar secret hidden in the simplest and the frailest and the least expected.It was this calm desert under this vast sky blended with your relished memories of that river you lavishly garbed, all of these have conspired inspired a sensitive soul and one distinguished poet to write this.