Tuesday, May 14, 2013

My Rights Go Hand In Hand With My Responsibilities Comments

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My rights go hand in hand with my responsibilities
My rights to having a perfect childhood
My responsibility to being a good child
A brighter and an excellent way to my adulthood
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Independence vs responsibility 01 September 2022

Wanna poem on it

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Bakuli Bhakali 12 November 2015

my rights go hand in hand with my responsibilities, a beauty with an arresting aroma

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Roseann Shawiak 22 October 2014

Balance is always the key in life, without it the scales tip too much either way and upset the nature of behaving responsibly. Children need to be able to discover, explore, experience life in order to appreciate and become responsible adults with open minds, able to grasp logic and reason. Combining imagination with intellect will foster wisdom in it's purest form, I believe. Great message, you achieved your goal! ! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Douglas Scotney 18 May 2013

Keep on caring. Check my: The Meaning of ''Wild'

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Hazel Durham 16 May 2013

Yes freedom goes hand in hand with responsibilities, but it is also good to be carefree when your young to experience a life lived within your own imagination! Great write!

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Ramesh Rai 15 May 2013

and we can achieve all through poetry. well vesed

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Sallam Yassin 15 May 2013

let we balance our rights to our responsibilities that is a great message for poetry and you penned it in a good way well

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Karen Sinclair 15 May 2013

lovely write but its a shame children should not go wild... every child should be free to release (safely in a safe environment of course) other than that i enjoyed this thank you (ps maybe its just a cultural thing)

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