Thursday, June 7, 2012

My Rights.. Comments

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My parents take me to the Malls one after another,
Where I have seen local people and foreigners,
Young boys and girls hug and kiss each other, while shopping,
My parents did not bother to notice what I am watching,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 07 June 2012

a nave narration of facts that parents ignore. shan

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 07 June 2012

sensitive and sensible...to capture right senses! !

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Danny Draper 07 June 2012

This is a good expression of true emotions in free form. Besides writing your emotions sharing them with your parents is also a good way to communicate. Poetry should be shared.

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Wahab Abdul 07 June 2012

nice one..good thinking, good rhythm and good question

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