Friday, October 25, 2013

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The lovely flower with alluring essence...
The ripe fruit with it's juice...
The flushing meadow and the golden bay
Attract me so intense.
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 16 May 2014

This side of you wanting and loving - being enticed and fascinated brings a smile to my heart at how carefree you feel in your own befitting way. This poem fits you perfectly, Amitava. RoseAnn

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Lyn Paul 26 October 2013

A great carefree write.

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David Wood 26 October 2013

To be as free as a wasp with out a car in the world would be great. Another good poem.

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Amitava Sur

Amitava Sur

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