Wednesday, December 24, 2008
My Rhyming Poem* Comments
Rating: ★4.8
I am 55 and a little crazy,
If I stand up to fast things become a little hazy.
I need another line,
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Saint Cynosure
28 December 2008
Hey good job for the first try, or second, or third, ...good job.
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Jay P. Narain
24 December 2008
You have done very well. May be the second line needs little overhaul. Thanks for sharing.
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8/5/2025 6:46:12 AM # 1.0.0
Ahhh! You know Cynosure helped me to learn to control my rhymes as well. But I am sure the education you are getting is far more deeper than mine. ; 0) LOL! (Just so kidding with you.) This was a wonderful piece and your rhyme was completely superb. Seriously I think you did a great job. Your thoughts are clear and this poem is fun. Take Care, Stacey