Wednesday, July 6, 2005

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Lauren Phillips
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J P Klegg 06 July 2005

I would either put a space between the last letter of the line before the lines in parentheses or just make the parenthetic lines completely separate lines. Not sure I understand the need to squish them together the way they are now.

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Lauren Phillips

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