Tuesday, August 25, 2009

My Restoration Comments

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The peak of the mountain
I shall soon reach
To scream out all the rain
And remove the stabbing leech
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Lorena Lalen Cruz
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Danzen D. 12 September 2009

The beauty of self-healing when the leeches and parasites are gone...wonderfully expressed in a personally customized and beautiful poem. Great piece, keep writing!

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Julia Pascual 28 August 2009

this is one poem i really liked... nice write... =)

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Nashy Lamen 27 August 2009

To unveil the ones unsaid And the truth between life's cry.. I like this part... Life's cry.. haha.. Your restoration... You will be restores.. BELIEVE! ... the emotions expressed are strong needs.. To escape and restore... Nice write... keep writing.. :)

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Ted M 25 August 2009

The new beginning, the cleansing of the mind. Admire your attitude. Forget the past, get up to a good start. You are what you want to be. Best wishes.......

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