Monday, March 3, 2008

My Requiem Comments

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she said
'keep going on
i am a bit tired
i would join you soon'
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Usman Hanif
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Waqas Naeem 06 December 2008

Quite a requiem! One for TRO i'd say.. lolz! I like the subtlety in this piece, the way the scene shifts...nicely done man...

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Malini Kadir 07 April 2008

I like the way you have began this....poetry...

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Samra Mahmood 01 April 2008

poem is good...keep up the gud work

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