Friday, April 6, 2012

My Reply To Your Message....≪3 Comments

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Staring your message at my computer screen,
For a moment, I felt something different in the air,
I could not help myself but to stare.
Thinking of our first meet near to arrive,
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Sharad Juneja 20 April 2012

very deep n intense....an advice make it bit crisp......shorten sentences

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Unwritten Soul 06 April 2012

You really sink in the deep love sea, and inspired you for such beautiful writing, it simply done by you like there's no hardness to do. Such a nice poem, a nice write! keep writing! _Unwritten Soul

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