Staring your message at my computer screen,
For a moment, I felt something different in the air,
I could not help myself but to stare.
Thinking of our first meet near to arrive,
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You really sink in the deep love sea, and inspired you for such beautiful writing, it simply done by you like there's no hardness to do. Such a nice poem, a nice write! keep writing! _Unwritten Soul
very deep n intense....an advice make it bit crisp......shorten sentences