My Reply To A Disappointed Friend... Comments

good advice you give to your friend, Raihana...powerful words full of positiveness inside...good piece...thanks...10

yea, the reply is significant. well penned........10+

A worthwhile message of advice. A good way to begin a poem. The questions grab the attention of the reader right away. You show some originality with “ring of change” and “flow with the right”. Again you use just the right amount of words to express your thoughts which helps the action flow quickly.

Fine advice, it gives a light. Thanks for sharing.

A nice composition. Love it.