Sunday, March 8, 2015

My Repeater Doll Comments

Rating: 5.0

Five years passed,
My repeater doll was sleeping somewhere,
While I was looking for a book,
I saw my friend,
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Bisma Mirza
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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 May 2023

Thanks God! She's not dead.....Wonderful. Loved this beautiful poem.5 stars and to my favourites!

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Jazib Kamalvi 13 April 2018

An innocent write, Bisma. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 June 2015

Very nicely envisioned. A palatable poem I like most. Thanks for posting.......10

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Valsa George 08 March 2015

A sweet poem! I am sure children too would love this! Thanks!

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Akhtar Jawad 08 March 2015

A wonderful poem, sweet and lovely.....................10

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