Wednesday, May 24, 2017

My Relation Comments

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Still, I think you deep, feel heavy
In the silent hours of post midnight
You spark in me sudden, setting fire
Not able to sleep, just lying, rolling,
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Bichitra Anand
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Dev Anand 02 September 2017

You spark in me sudden, setting fire Not able to sleep, just lying, rolling, we are simple human beings and our hearts yearn for a love....... when it comes we roll and cannot sleep. we all go through this experience of love. you have wonderfully pictured it.. thank you dear poetess. dev

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Bichitra Anand 02 September 2017

Thanks dear Dev for your comments.

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Nicole Duckery 29 June 2017

I understand completely. Nicely done. Hoping for the best.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 June 2017

But, the nights end blinkless, unanswered love, relationship, , , , , its mysteries...... you have penned it so well in your own beautiful expressions.. tha nk you dear poetess. tony

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 31 May 2017

90% lovers mis their love enroute.They search the reason for lifelong.beautiful...10

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