Sunday, July 7, 2013

My Rejected Boy Comments

Rating: ★4.5

He cries no one hears
He is sited all alone the corner
They all laugh so he fears
Out there he goes
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Hazel Joy
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Dave Walker 09 August 2013

He could surprise everyone yet, he can become anyone he chooses to be, if he wishes. A lot of people think they don't have chooses but we do. He just has to make his and believe in it. Then he will forever smile. A great poem.

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Jameel Ahmed Ansari 07 July 2013

nice one.keep it up dear.write more poems

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