Saturday, December 5, 2009

My Reign (C) 12-5-09 Comments

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I shall remain notorious
As long as I’m victorious
And my life will be pain free
Not plain see, but glorious
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Zahir Kijani
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Vivid, bold , threaded with lovely imagery. Good work! ; D

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Stefanie Fontker 21 February 2010

I like this one, your rhyming scheme here is pretty awesome. You will remain notorious. Good read.

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Zahir Kijani

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