Saturday, May 13, 2006

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i leave a mark on the world cus it left one on me,
im no longer a boy, a man to be,
Teenage years squandered on living,
A life i dont wish to live,
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Phil Whittaker
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Mary-Elizabeth Conn 28 October 2006

W00t! Really good poem, mate- so deep! Keep up the good work. Luv ya, :) xx

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Dana Tyrrell 16 May 2006

i like to think of this one as, like, 'innocence lost' great job, i enjoyed it ~Dana~

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