Friday, May 14, 2010

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As I stutter and stumble in the dark,
on this night so humble and stark,
I am overwhelmed by an eerie sensation,
my mind and body overcome by trepidation,
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Dale Mullock
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Mari Martin 25 May 2010

Excellent! ! ! Just simply excellent... the fear of ourselves - our shortcomings, our less than perfect actions/reactions, our false sense of greatness, our beliefs we hold so strongly until they are put to the test of others; the shadows ..... The shadows of life can, many times, be quite frightful.... especially when imagination asks us to dance, or, we discover we aren't as mighty as we humans tend to think. I enjoyed this poem endlessly....... Mari Martin

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