Tuesday, July 31, 2012

My Realization Comments

Rating: 4.8

My realization has just now begun
My life's not about what can't be undone
But trying to change the future beginning now
And figuring out what my purpose is about
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Kaitlin Schmidt
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 April 2016

And in the end he will be renewed In the end he will have a soul anew Unending forgiveness is here as I can see From my living Hell I am set free. a beautiful poem that ends up in hope..... religion, belief, faith....... all that counts so much in our lives, to get freed from pain, suffering and hatred and purify ourselves. thank you for all these themes that you are presenting. thank you. tony

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Kim Barney 07 December 2014

Kailtlin, this is a lovely poem, and you obviously have talent, but it is also your NEWEST poem and was submitted more than two years ago. Have you stopped writing? I sincerely hope that you are well and will give us some more of your lovely poems to enjoy.

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Kelly Seale 09 August 2012

Beautiful write Kaitlin, you express yourself with heart feelings, and truth. Good Ink! -Kelly.

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