My Real Face On The Mirror............. Comments

.....seld -defining...self realisation and of course self -betterment..nice theme..surely everyone can be a king for all the things one thinks of! ..the realsation in the poem and in every indidvidual is an powerful thing! ! ! ..nice and useful theme...10++ for u Sebastine keep luking oneself in a better light! ! ! ! ...

my frst attempt to commnt s not accepted.so to be sure am not wasting my time, i made it this way...to the author: : please read my commnt from the bottom up to the top....this s becoz i dont want that all my written wrds will jst disappear when submitted, , , , so, there is it...please email ths poem of yours to mine dear childish son of mine....i like this very much...i like this, promise.. bye bye lav ya, ,

be firm...be strong...dont jst bow your head for a loss, , ..fly high as the eagles do, for you are great...show to the world that you are capable in doing these things lined in your poem...... but dont frget, , , , , , a good winner has a heart of pure gold, , , stay as respectful as you are for that is the attitude i like from you...the entire context of the poem is reliable to get a high regard for this author..even f am a ghost, dont frget our passwrd...lav ya

from the very first line of this poem up to the end, the thought is intack, , changing of stanzas did not affect the flow of the thought...it is really a work of a new born star....it is really beautiful... the author is flexible.... wrote sad poems then shift to a funny one then goes to a very sensitive definitions of the word ''CHALLENGE''..i like the words you used...it is simple that we could understand easily without looking to any help.. simplicity could make the viewers feel comfrtable while reading..your chosen words reflect to your personality...you are sensitive, emotional but possessed a very sharp intellect..

the thought is stick to only one idea, , to change and soar high....no harm to show and to dispaly this skilled work of yours, , , it is very excellent....there are lines you touch about being a looser, it is good, at least there is a comparison between the looser and the winner..at first you may be a looser but because of your willingness to mprove, you didnot notice that you almost be on top already..

MY GOD....THIS IS EXCELLENT...the title of the poem fits to every lines of the whole..this is godly written, , , well penned..well written......well define....well lined..and well expressed...everything in this poem is perfectly done.. , , it shows ncourage....my gosh, i dont know how to write my words but allow me to enumerate this line by line....

ill be back later.....all my first commnt disappeared....ill be back again sweety....

my gosh......why? my frst attempt did not work...as f it s blocked..that contains my best wrds ever for this poem, , , , well ill try another....