My Raindrops Comments

Fantastic vocabulary.... wow! Best words in best order that make your poem always and always...

Raindrops that runs and rushes into a rich, refreshing river. Thanks for sharing my friend.

the freshness of the rain you brought in your lines... lovely...10

Its far better than mine, Anjali, because this is so light and crisp and there's a frisky air about it, a happy exuberance, an all pervading jubilation about being alive...

U kiss my cheeks As I look at the pregnant sky The glow on ur face Matched the shine of my eye Don't go away, lil raindrop For u I hv seen, mother earth cry.... Anjali...ur poems are eternal,

There are parts of this poem that remind me of my poem 'Wandering Child'. Please read it when you can, I would love to hear what you think. Your poem mainly towards the end is what reminds me of mine. Deborah Cromer

La embriaguez de nuestra noche juntos No me ha abondonado La sensualidad de cuerpo aun permanece entrelazada en mis brazos Si, recuerdo El sueno de tus labios permanece con cada suspiro que doy Si, lo recuerdo English translation- The dreams of yours so drunken are still sunken Still there in sensuosness of your body and entwined in my arms I opned my eyes and they are still not perturbed Yes, i recall, to get drenched in your rains my dreams with yours forever.

I loved the easy breezy flow to this one. Very creative and the imagery is vivid. Thank you for sharing.

soul river runs so dry, your raindrops softly kisses the top of mountains, down the valley of beauty into the raging river of love, into a vast ocean happiness, for you so love........ WoW what can i say about this one...WOW..... So many 10sssssssssssssssssssssssss and +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

this poem is truly one of ur best.

lovely! I feel it's better if we listen to Chopin's Raindropp Prelude while we read this cute poem. keep writing!

what a pretty poem i love it

Great Poem. It brings a soothing calmness to me!

It's a beautifully expressed poem. I like it. Thanks for sharing with me

good poem...drizzling sweet...'setaciously'- a typo there...needs edit...10

Over hilltops, treetops, rooftops, cheektops, ......... ........................ .......................donno abt the rain but u lady are sure on the top of the world..ur effect is all over us.

RAINDROPS GARNERING SECRETS WOW... NICE THOT...! ! ! :)

it's a beautiful poem anjali keep doing good.

'Oh! ! insouciant raindrops, art thou so pure? ' Very nice composition. 10+

I don't know why I'm so afraid to lose u when u r not even mine. I don't know why I luv u so when u don't even luv me. I don't know why u r the one when I'm just a someone to u.