Sunday, March 28, 2010

'My Rain' Comments

Rating: 4.3

She huddles in a corner,
away from everyone else.
She sits there and stares blankly,
trynna get a hold of herself.
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Elie Lugo
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Adeline Foster 29 September 2011

trynna get a hold of herself. Honey, there really is no such word as 'trynna' I believe you meant, 'trying to' Adeline

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Marieta Maglas 28 May 2010

the way you express your emotion is very nice....thank you for sharing....Mari

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