Thursday, June 8, 2017

My Rain Comments

Rating: 4.8

When it become late evening
I went to my terrace, for a walk
I saw clouds coming together and it was dark
The sun dissappeared
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Beryl Jacob
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Dr Antony Theodore 04 November 2018

I opened my eyes I realize that it was a drop of water But for me It was drop of love....... with drops of love i was in paradise....... wonderful imagination..... you are so young my dear poet and you are gifted with special talents from God........ write and write my dear young poet. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Jacob. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 June 2017

Such a lovely poem..... a big 10++++++

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