Saturday, May 27, 2023

My Raging Bull Is Ever Ready To Take A Fight - Humorous Comments

Rating: 4.8

My fierce bull is always prepared to engage in a brawl,
his horns are pointed, his hooves are strong after all.
He snorts and stamps, he rushes forward with might,
In battles, he never backs down from a fight.
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M. Asim Nehal
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David Wood 01 June 2023

Many decades ago we had a bull on the farm called Concord after the airliner of the same name. It was good on take off but bad on landing, and the cows could outrun it! ! Good poem Asim.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 June 2023

excellent piece Asim Encore! Encore!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 June 2023

The bull could be you, a captivating one self-portrait with an exciting fight and outcome. Very well stated, Dr. M Asim Nehal Sir! 5*****

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Richard Wlodarski 01 June 2023

Parody? Moral? Satire? All fit so very well in describing this truly outstanding poem. Thoroughly enjoyed every single line, Asim! ! !

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Sandra Feldman 29 May 2023

So well written and as amusing as can be! Reading its humorous and light verses distracts us from the sad realities that so surround us today. Thank you for this marvelous contribution! Full Stars.

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Interesting to read. Nice. Enjoyed the subtle humour. Encore

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Bri Edwards 28 May 2023

'but I still adore him, even if he's not as rough, my fierce bull is still the greatest, even if he's a bit tough.' this reminds me of when a PH friend told me I'd said just the opposite of what I meant to say in a small pert of one poem. : (

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Rajan T Renganathan 28 May 2023

Bull chasing mouse made me LOL. Such bulls are better to be kept in check. The symbolic use of bull jumping into any fight is something very common with many. Full Praises for this humorous and a satirical poem.

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Martinez Salotori 27 May 2023

Interesting poem, even your bull is ready to challenge a mouse...

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