Thursday, May 22, 2014

My Purpose Revealed Comments

Rating: 5.0

What is my purpose, my calling,
Why was I thrust on this plane?
Of what achievements may I boast
When the sun sets on my domain?
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Lora Colon
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Chuy Amante 01 June 2014

Read it again and still lovin' it all Grand LOVER you are be it Spring or Fall! One so well loved and loving offers a perspective rare, reckless abandon when you let down your hair?

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Amitava Sur 27 May 2014

So nice to go through, with all question and doubts dealt in and at last reaching to a conclusion - I was born to love you evermore very nice, Lora, thanks.

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Colleen Courtney 25 May 2014

I'm so enamored of this poem! As one who has pondered this very same question from a young age (which I find strange in itself) I can't help but relate to this so perfectly penned write! Thank you fr sharing! Has definitely been added to my list of favorites!

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Brian Johnston 23 May 2014

Now that is what I call a twist! And the you is not even capitalized (lucky someone) . You are surely a Poet Laureate of the heart!

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Chuy Amante 23 May 2014

Wow! This came from deep within who cannot see this clearly will certainly die in sin! A+ my dear! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 23 May 2014

Good morning poet Lora, and this was a very interesting, attention hold poem, I enjoyed, Loyd

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 23 May 2014

the passionate culmination in the climax proves this navigation is worth everything. remain inked in love your quill.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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