Sunday, August 16, 2009

My Pupose, My Reason Comments

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Seeking searching
My purpose my reason
For someone for something
For me to learn the lesson
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Lorena Lalen Cruz
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Danzen D. 12 September 2009

Don't be too rushing or desperate to finish what God is asking...for if you finish it quick, what is there left to do? (it starts with a D...) Enjoy life as we seek His purpose, for at the near-end of this life, we may realize that our true reason for living was not in great works, nor in great power, but in those short moments when we had time for everyone, for God, and for ourselves. Hehe, great poem, keep writing!

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Julia Pascual 25 August 2009

this is really a nice poem... someone being confused at the first.. then at the end realizes the real goal or purpose in life.. nice job...

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Ted M 22 August 2009

Our purpose, to make a difference in whichever small way we can to make this a world a better place, with peace and happiness......Nice write.........

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Nashy Lamen 21 August 2009

Nicely written... My purpose, my reason... haha.. catchy... =) Keep writting!

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yes very nice poem, purpose of life? no one really knows

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