Friday, December 12, 2008

My Puddle Comments

Rating: 5.0

I smiled when I saw you looking back at me
I feel like a little toddler every time I see you
I couldn't walk away because I was mesmerized
By how easily you flow and how glossy you look
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Hannah Smith
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Bill Thomas 30 January 2009

Marisol! ! ! You transport me back to my childhood... & say what can't be said in words that I've longed to be able to use... you have a good gift: keep on using it! Every good wish, Bill

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