Sunday, May 1, 2005

My Psychosis Comments

Rating: 4.8

Slowly and without trace
You imprinted yourself upon my senses
left me reeling
coiling around me, choking out apathy
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T J Morgan
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Herbert Nehrlich1 01 May 2005

Not a bad poem at all. But what does Pscychosis (sic) mean? H

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Tallie Kane 01 May 2005

Ooh very nice use of emotives there, I especially love the last line and the structure of the poem, really put across the whole motive of the poem. Keep writing, Tallie x

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