Sunday, October 31, 2010

My Psalm Comments

Rating: 3.5

In my world long been found
Long I kept this revered psalm
Inside me it grew abound
Yet to fool another one -
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Ahyela Andojar
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Ahmed Abomahfouz 13 March 2014

good poem, words are rich, rhyme is musical, structure needs re-evaluation

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