Friday, December 29, 2006

My Promise Comments

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A nervous laugh
Then I see you smile
I wonder what your soul has seen
Has it felt love
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Matt Mondschein
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John Tiong Chunghoo 30 December 2006

i love the clarity of your mind and how you get it onto the page. keep it up matt.

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Charley60 K 29 December 2006

What a beautiful write and so much care and wonder for someone that you see is hurting or has been through a lot. Many are the pains of a person's life young or old and we never know exactly what another has gone through. But you write is a write of love and empathy. She is very fortunate to know you.... Thanks for sharing.....the world needs more hearts like yours....

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