Tuesday, October 13, 2009

My Princess Comments

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Me, in my morning rush hour

cook scrub and clean
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ratnaprabha raykar
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 May 2010

very nice.. i too feel with the loss of ur princess. the nightingales song in ur life and how it influences you. very nice and poetic. thank u for sharing this. would like to get ur comments on my poems too. thank u again

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Prabhudev Aradhya 10 February 2010

Prabha, this is quite touching and a poem expressing your inner feelings through a nightingale's singing. It is true, that God always gives different options, when he takes away one. Prabhu Anna and Ratnaprabha

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Kesav Easwaran 14 October 2009

change house or not, a chiding princess to reside ever in your memory...good write Ratna...your lines follows the bird's chiding...10

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ratnaprabha raykar

ratnaprabha raykar

hubli karnataka, india
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