My Prince Comments

I think the subject is well thought, and presented with an effort to do good work. But I think the rhyming is a bit forced and it doesnt flow as smooth as your other poems. Keep writing..

this one is well expressed for the season

Written from the view of the opposite gender gives an interesting flair to this piece - - the last stanza refers to a decision made because of being hurt. The verse may read better as presented prose but it has an innocence which over-rides this. Well done.