Monday, March 10, 2008

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Is life worth a million,
Or nil at all?

My wife often said
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Samson Sam 17 July 2008

Brave attempt. Life demands so much from us, so much we pay for our....

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Melvin Banggollay 11 March 2008

Wonderful poem again brother. Well, you should not die yet for you have not yet made 7 million poems. I have kids too and they inspired me to go on breathing and working even sometimes my life could never be emptied from beads of misery. thanks, best wishes, melvin

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Werner Horne 11 March 2008

Good poem Marvin. Yea I cried as poems always do for me but this time it hit home as I have 2 children and the love for them makes me stare at a blank page without knowing what to write. The page is somehow so clean so holy, yet the scary part is that the page remains empty unless I start. Perhaps after your poem I will try again.

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Coreena Dejesus 10 March 2008

I love poems that are based around family. Great write!

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John Tiong Chunghoo 10 March 2008

a lovely poem, marvin about love between husband and family. will go on reading your poetry.

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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