~ My Precious Time ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
July 1,2010
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What a wonderful wordplay with such great meaning and in end time is denied by you not having time for time itself Your Precious Time love it.
Front and center. Best case against time...'i have no time to give you my time' very creative and written with such great disposition. totally enjoyed
A deep little poem. Makes one contemplate! They say time is of the essence! Enjoyed read! ; D
Time and tide waits for no man. Procrastination is thief of time. Time is the essence of any contract. Catch time by the forelock. Time alone will set right things. One should be time conscious. Timetable. Measure time. Keep time. Life time achievement. How many times I can tell you about this time? It is your good time that everyone appreciate your wonderful work.
Each second is unique. When Time spent, it'll never come back like the spoken word, the thrown arrow and the lost chance. Time is precious, sure, because it's unique and I love such uniqueness. In fact we all live just a long day which finishes by a seperation moment, the moment of DEATH (our common destination) . Nivedita I've enjoyed reading your poem. ThanksForSharing :)
Time, the ever changing reality which changes everything, gets a poetic expression through this poem.
It resembles to the poem 'Ring out, wild bells' written by Lord Tennyson. Yes time is precious, and we should move ahead trusting the mighty time without an iota of doubt. Very nicely composed.10+++
when you don't have time for time so save some time so that you can save time......nice verses...you've wasted your time reading my opinion because you know it i think=) thanks for sharing
Time I feel you will be pulled back to write upon this theme again and again reminds of what I was expressing in 'The Mind Killer', 'Karma Of Destinies Spoken', 'Sung Melody Your Life? ' and 'Time Huntress Dancing' etc. I look forward to reading your many future poems of time.
A very cute and simple verse about Time. But Time is only a notion. The reality is movement, change or becoming is mistaken as Time and Passage of Time.
A very cute and simple verse about Time. But Time is only a notion. The reality is movement, change or becoming is mistaken as Time and Passage of Time.
the sharpest poem for time and the way you expressing yourself about time is really good! ! This is a poem which stand on human against time and what can i say.... this is excellent poem which i believe ever reader get your point after the last period. 10/10
Sounds like you are upset with the time for its constant and merciless passing... Time is the puzzle of centuries... I'm not sure if we'll ever find the way to stop it... Cute, little write :)
Sorry time I’ve no time To give you My precious time! kind of funny and meaningful at the same time....telling time 'i have no time for you' n naming it precious! ...reveals your pride, confidence, faith...your value for time and again snap back at time at the end of all 'sorry time i have no time'....a drama of timeless time..an understanding, acceptance..denial...
Poem of great understanding...time heals, time kills, et al... a continuum, nonreversal in which many events occur. Thus, time waits for no one. a 10+++ for this poem of great wisdom.
Word and conceptual .wizardry…with pinch of satire….beautiful timing of ending…a clean tenner… Thanks Poet for such a nice poem
Fantastic. Its like the whirlwind to diffuse all the hazards of temporaryliness. Nothing is indispensible, nothing is more greater than me. I exist for this earth and universe. I exist for this wholeness of beauty and beautified hollowness or fullness. First and last word is I exist. Time is a little factor to follow me or to make the resistance of exposing my wholeness. Thank you for beginning of your new journey with such a lucid way. Thank you very much. Regards, 10+++++++ pranab
A bit unusual in Style but really got your point across, nice one! As they say, good things come in small measures!