Saturday, November 2, 2013

My Precious One Comments

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'My precious one that I now miss
Whose love is ever in my heart
In silence, I have always wished
That we can never be apart
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Jesus Diaz Llorico
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Dinesan Madathil 17 November 2013

Excellent rendering Mr Jesus. The diction and the apt parameters applied are too fine. Keep writing..

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 07 November 2013

A lovely poem. The gesture of the birds well described.

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