My Precious Love. Comments

Oh this is very good. I find it very hard to write about the people I love most. I always am afraid I won't get it right, but you did an awesome job. I especially enjoyed the last three verses. You described her pain and beauty in vivid and relatable ways. Your love for her really shines through and I agree with Soren, the line about the girl who cries through a flower is INCREDIBLE. Great ink.

Great write indeed! The third stanza is my favourite. 'Twas especially profound (in my opinion) and I simply love the line Is a girl who cries through a flower. That, my friend, is truly poetry. The emotion in the poem is great too- you can really feel the love you have for this girl, namely Lucy.

haha, i dated a girl named Lucy - great write my friend, and congrats on getting yourself a good chick!