My Prayers Comments

In this letter, / i'd like to say, thank you for hearing me, / when I pray. Just change its internal design of written expression. Rhyming very well. Prose form in poem making is very hard I think. Any way, the simplicity of writing such lines makes me astonished. So soft the human heart, just want to make the relation with the ultimate source of life with simply a prayer. So helpless the human being with all its pride falling false to face the origin of time and space. Well written simplicity just simply with lucid words. Thank you.10/10 Regrds, pranab