Sunday, November 17, 2024

My Prayer Is A Simple One Comments

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I threw myself upon Mount Sinai
and demanded answers for my shame.
This pain
that burns within me is often stronger than
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Sophia Conway
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Dennis Ryan 17 November 2024

Your previous poem, ‘Sleepless' is better poem, perhaps, but it can't match the directness and passion of this one—read Shakespeare, Sonnet #32 for passion/commitment over style.

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