Monday, November 11, 2013

My Prayer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Set beneath the fall leaves,
Stand sand beneath my feet.
A breeze rushes the ocean tides, and
Swallows the last of my footsteps.
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Kaity Desrosiers
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 14 June 2015

I love the fall leaves, the sea of pain, the deception, the compassion, the joy, and finally the sky of hope. Hope is the last refuge.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 17 November 2013

Beautiful! That's a 10+++. I love this poem. It is very poetic.

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Kaity Desrosiers

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