Wednesday, May 24, 2023

My Poking Nose - Humorous Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beware of my seemingly innocent countenance,
It may deceive you, but those who have witnessed it,
will always remember, the difficulty they faced,
not due to my proboscis (nose) ,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Bharati Nayak 26 May 2023

Another fun poem from your pen! Enjoyed reading and laughed.We should not poke nose, but protect it from from unexpected blows

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Zoyza Da Vinka 26 May 2023

Ha ha it won't help any cause 😜 control over it

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Bri Edwards 26 May 2023

TRY to keep your nose clean' aka 'avoid getting into trouble'

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Bri Edwards 26 May 2023

'once I attempted to rid myself of it, but all my efforts were in vain, and wherever I went, it attracted their difficulties and placed me in danger.' YES, your 'nose' might get 'bent'! ! DON'T go online. bri : ) 5 stars

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Bri Edwards 26 May 2023

But now I'm satisfied that it's not the 'nose' like the fleshy above one's mouth, but...how can I explain it? Did I already state this: 'The meaning of STICK/POKE ONE'S NOSE IN/INTO is to get involved in or want information about (something that does not concern one) .' bri ; ])

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Bri Edwards 26 May 2023

I was uncertain, as I began to read this poem, as to what intrusions the speaker's nose was guilty of committing/'doing'. At first I thought the nose just had a super-sniffing ability.

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Bri Edwards 26 May 2023

I am 'struck' my the obvious (to me) & unusual use of punctuation marks, and the lack of capitalization where I would use it. You KNOW what I mean, I think. It did NOT bother me, but could at times.

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Bri Edwards 26 May 2023

'What does poking his nose in expression mean? ... poke one's nose into, to. To interfere, to meddle.... THERE are some in the international community who would be quick to accuse US president George Bush of poking his nose in where it doesn't belong.'

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Bri Edwards 26 May 2023

'Pinocchio's nose' I saw in Walt Disney's animated movie Pinocchio when I was a kid. The other guy I never heard of until I 'googled' just now. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 26 May 2023

'New Delhi: The trailer of Amitabh Bachchan's upcoming film Gulabo Sitabo, which released last week, opened to largely positive reviews from the audiences. However, a section on the Internet couldn't help but notice Amitabh Bachchan's 'fake nose' in the trailer.'

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Suzon Albert 26 May 2023

I liked the humour part in your poem,100/100 have this bad habit.

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Rajan T Renganathan 26 May 2023

Human nature is tough to change, Now I live in seclusion, In a distant place, maintaining a safe distance from all sorts of trouble, hoping that this lengthy nose will forget the art of intrusion.

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Juhaina Tumlu 25 May 2023

How to control nose poking is never taught anywhere, one learns it by hard ways. Good humorous poem with underline lesson. Thoughtful and thought provoking.

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