Friday, August 19, 2005

My Poison Comments

Rating: 5.0

The question I long to ask you
spills over my tongue
hits my teeth
And I swallow it down like Cuervo and lime
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Gainor Ventresco
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Wanda Swim Strunk 18 September 2005

Most excellent. I love your relationship of how one baptizes the soul, Cuervo to the 'empty easter Moring tomb'. I get this, may have just gone thru this phase.

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Max Reif 01 September 2005

I think this is a strong poem, too. You convey the strong emotions well through the images.

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Uriah Hamilton 19 August 2005

Dear Gainor, it is not fair to write a poem this good! Are you trying to make me throw away my pens and notebooks?

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Gainor Ventresco

Gainor Ventresco

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