My Poetry Book Comments
I changed my mind about a book
it's way too much in work.
And who'd appreciate the look
that others give a jerk.
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Good thought, Herbert. :) We poets could only hope we could enter the 'pearly gates' by the merits of our poetry. Your third stanza needs a 'will' trimmed off. If you had both of those just for the meter, then find another word. You still make me smile. Raynette
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8/27/2025 2:24:49 PM # 1.0.0
Jolly number for me to go to bed on. Love the finish above all. Cheers, Herbsy!