My heart got a blow
But not by any foe
It’s the one I bow
Who made me sow?
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Quite a good rhyme and rhythm. Refreshingly good. Kudos.
Flowing words so continously in vividness and fine rhymes too...10
great flow. i belive there is a lover in you whose thirst is yet to be quenched.great rhyming as usual. voted10 surya
YOUR POETRY IS SLOW, THIS MUCH WE KNOW BUT IT'S GOT A GREAT FLOW. GR8T WRITE A TEN
such poem that leads us to know the basic of poetry.....a very practical way of expressing the feeling...clear and sound and understandable to each reader... worth to keep in the public and private library for who want to know the basic of poetry....thank for sharing.....a 10 +
very nicely done! ! ! ! i like the flow and the rhyme AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! ! !