Tuesday, July 14, 2009

My Poetry Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart got a blow
But not by any foe
It’s the one I bow
Who made me sow?
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Janell Cressman 20 July 2009

very nicely done! ! ! ! i like the flow and the rhyme AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 16 July 2009

Quite a good rhyme and rhythm. Refreshingly good. Kudos.

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Eyan Desir 15 July 2009

Good rhymes........good write

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Catrina Heart 15 July 2009

Flowing words so continously in vividness and fine rhymes too...10

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Surya . 14 July 2009

great flow. i belive there is a lover in you whose thirst is yet to be quenched.great rhyming as usual. voted10 surya

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Louis Rams 14 July 2009

YOUR POETRY IS SLOW, THIS MUCH WE KNOW BUT IT'S GOT A GREAT FLOW. GR8T WRITE A TEN

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Antonio Liao 14 July 2009

such poem that leads us to know the basic of poetry.....a very practical way of expressing the feeling...clear and sound and understandable to each reader... worth to keep in the public and private library for who want to know the basic of poetry....thank for sharing.....a 10 +

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Joseph Poewhit 14 July 2009

Interesting self analysis poem

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