My Poetic 'if' Comments

Delightful to read. The connection between rainbow, wrinkle, and smile is a very strong visual. Rainbows and especially wrinkles are creative additions to the anthology of love imagery. I enjoyed reading this and thinking about the pictures unfolding in my mind. Thank you.

As a perception the poem here is a very very good one.Do correct its inappropriate english here and there.

Poetic if i like it If i could fold my youth to a wrinkle I must appear at every occasion That you forget to smile upon your life Thanks for sharing.

If i could give my life to a rainbow I must shine at the very second That you happen to look up at the sky= If I could fly to a rainbow//I would make it shine at....nd//you might happen look...//