Have your pen And notebook with you,
Tote it wherever you may go,
To indite the events of time;
Make spontaneous flow of lines,
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i love this poem...the best! keep writing my friend, you have the passion for this art.
A very exquisite and well-penned tribute of a young talented poet to his teacher. Keep on working and sharing, Juneil! Best wishes. A.
Dear Juneil, Your gradma was very particular in advising you all the ingredients to present a beautiful poetry (curry?) e.g.Tote of Pen, Notebook, Spontaneous flow of Poetic Rhymes, Imagery and to vivify that Flavour and Colour. AND SHE HAS GIVEN TO RIGHTFUL OWNER. I am sure you will flourish with new ideas everyday. A very good poem deserves A10 from me.--Rajkumar
You do me proud adopted Poemhunter grandson! Anyone with your passion and talent is sure to go far in the wonderful art of writing. Even though you 'have picked my brains to bits' I still love you! The world is your oyster... Karin Anderson
wawww! ! ! i don't know what to say... amazing... and much more.... keep up the great work! ! : D
Ah - - a verse fitting well to the title and what a tribute Juneil - - she will be delighted I know...... well written my friend......10 + + + from Fay..xx
Grannie knows all the short cuts to save the young much time...good message...iip
Good poem. Good Granny. Good grandson. God bless Cheers. Subroto
Grannie was a poet who led by example, so will you be. 'Have your pen And notebook with you, Tote it wherever you may go, To indite the events of time' Thats exactly what i do as well, poems emerge from almost anything, anywhere.
Your grannie taught you well, Juneil. Always carry a notebook and jot down lines when they spring into your mind. Many a good poem has been lost without that vital notebook.... Fran xx
Juneil you have taken the advice from your poet Grannie and utilizing it well you are in overdrive....riding on the pink cloud that never goes away.....remain true to your words and they shall remain true to you.......