My Poems are not Poetry
Poetry rhythm is essential part
Communicative act of rhythms
Where words created music
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Mary i always enjoy reading your poems! Keep em coming gal! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad
Mary, If someone should tells you that your english are not good enough, should be me...people judges others without looking unto their own mirror, he might right used old english or traditional...but nothing are inside what he is writing thats nothing at all...doesn't mean you write a simple english your english are bad...he his self down write poetry as he though he are..so Mary follow your heart do not listen to other poet dont compare your self to them for they are not you...let them spoke what they want to spake they are not good them selves at all....your are sim'ple but readers are able to understand your work than those they think they are perfect so continue...dont give up..you are good cause you have it from your heart thats make you a better poet..
This is better than most of the garbage you see here. You know a lot about what youshould do. Too bad your English isn't better.
well, for not poetry, it is a very interesting poem.