Wednesday, January 4, 2006

My Poems (Haiku) Comments

Rating: 3.3

I do consider
my poems as my children
I shall not share them.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 04 January 2006

Ignore who, Mary? Oh....you mean the 'sediments'? H

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Mary Nagy 04 January 2006

Best to just ignore them Herbert.....I know it is frustrating. You get 10 from me! :)

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Herbert Nehrlich1 04 January 2006

You are correct, Liz. That is ONE Haiku. If you write several then you have more than one Haiku. And all my Haikus are 5-7-5 H

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Liz Munro 04 January 2006

Isn't a haiku 5-7-5 and one stanza? I don't know Sally tried to explain them to me but I still don't quite get them. Love the sediments esp 'It's strictly envy you know that you're inferior' 8/10 'cos I don't quite get haiku Liz.

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